I want to be your blanket.
I want to keep you warm at night.
But first comes marriage.
Then comes....
I love you so.
I need you still.
Baby...I always will.
I want to be your shoes and keep your feet warm.
No one needs not say... I shouldn't feel that way,
because they don't know
you take my
take my
take my
breath away!
Author notes
I want to be your sister.
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A contest entry
- My Ap family! by sunsunny3235.
500 points, ended April 12, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Hey
This poem sis is very good and very outstanding. Well written and well expressed. U have done a good job with this poem. keep up the marvelous work. Outstandin job
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I really enjoyed this, especially the ending
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'But first comes marriage.
Then comes...."
i like these lines, on how you leave it open to suggestion. very nice write, upbeat and hopeful.
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I liked this one.
It's cute and sweet.
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This is sweat
I saw this in the contest. Itis truly a nice piece. Nic
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Hi,
How would you phrase it? -
That is so sweet! I love that. Some of your rhyme isgood, but in places it needs work. You are officially my ap sister!
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