grey and white generation
cups colour children
'neath unconditional shelter
Author notes
image courtesy of google images.
In a list
A contest entry
- red balloon by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended April 1, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Yes, but they are fading fast as a generation and I think people would do well to listen to what they have to say before they pass along. Short put with a sharp point.


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I love the possible message this has.
Exquisite. -
lovely... x
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What a wonderful read this one is! I really like how much you said in three short lines!! Great job! I love it!!
Best of luck in this contest!


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Good work:
Nice job. I like the beginning and it blew me away. Nice job.
I'm a fan.
Evemauy

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