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held by invisibility

yearns to reach
new levels of sky

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • white stone
    July 9

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    I would love to take a balloon ride to the center of the universe and dissolve in oneness. If we are the balloon, enlightenment is when we pop, and there is only air. Left alot to the imagination and made my muse get frisky, you did,

  • J Macabre gold member
    April 2

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    "held by invisibility". That line is awesome...because you can't really see air and its the air holding it up.
    As simple as a concept as that is...its pretty brilliant.


  • Cup-a-Joe
    April 1
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    I like this.
    Joe


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    April 1
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    beautiful... x


  • Tqop
    March 31

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    Beautiful.

    You are an amazing writer. This is just so cute, and so adorable. Wow! Please keep writing. I love this poem. I'm a fan.

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