Language finds it's limits when
the meaning's always missed,
but you can take some comfort
in the honesty of this:
I love you.
With no asterisk,
I love you.
From the first time we kissed
(I love you)
An aged and broken notion
with the words that exist,
Strange how the sincerest ones
are always simplest...
I love you.
With no asterisk,
I love you.
From the first time we kissed-
I love you.
Author notes
A love song. I have a hard time writing them, because I don't like to say anything cliche, or lame. So, this is very pure and honest, and kinda simple, in a complex kind of way.
You can hear the song at purevolume.com, here.
A contest entry
- Conteset for those who are bored like meh. by Antebellum.
550 points, ended April 6, 28 entries
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Comments
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aww this is so beautiful. Very well said. You've done well. you've got two poems in this contest. Giving you split points. You received a 50 for this poem. Great work. Thanks for entering the contest. kahy
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the first part is my favortie.
beautifuly written
goodluck -
yeah defanitley i'd LOVE to hear this!!!!!!!!
it was beautiful it really was, and its true it didnt seem force rhymes at all! it just all flowed naturally into place.
awesome xxx
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Aww the fist stanza is so beautiful. The rhyme is so seamless i almost didn't realise it was there.
I would kill to here this song, it sounds wonderful from the lyrics.
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