Tagging you is like painting with my fingers...
even though I only clicked here and there.
The moment very slowly lingers...
so why do I see Sue Chang everywhere?
She slumbers all night long with candles burning...
always dreaming about a love that never ends.
Alone in the bedroom twisting and turning.
After all she's one of my Facebook friends.
How can I expand on this poem?
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This is great!
"She slumbers all night long with candles burning...
always dreaming about a love that never ends."
For me, i would change "she" to I and that fits me to a "T" What a great job you did on this one...
Hang in there.....
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