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~Myriad Of Feeling~ (Incomplete)


Skeleton seeks recognition - Anger

 

Disgust;
baby screwed eyes
reflect disappointment
of old unearthed discoveries
not known.

 

 

When the curtain opens - Fear

 

Presage

reveals distress
as spotlight dazzles lead,
tongue tied, slacked jaw awaiting prompt
to start.

 

Author notes

Cinquain is a short, usually unrhymed poem consisting of twenty-two syllables distributed as 2, 4, 6, 8, 2, in five lines. It was developed by the Imagist poet, Adelaide Crapsey.

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  • jasminerose
    March 31
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    Annnnnnnticapation.........is killing me
    Checking back soon bro!