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Etheree in Key of F

few
fox find
folly from
falling fairies.
falling fairies find
favor for feasting fox.
forlorn fairies fancy free,
find feasting fox fascinating.
finally falling fairies find friends,
for fairies fancy feasting female fox.

 

 

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Every single word in this poem starts with the letter F

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  • Rose Angel gold member
    April 13

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    Truly an alliteration fancy feast of foxes in a fantastic fable...Cleverly penned and terrific form! aunty


  • soulfultia gold member
    April 2
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    Fabulously fun filled finding favorites feasting!! ha! This was fun and challenging!!!! ~Tia


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    April 1

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    Wow, a veritable alliteration feast, well done Amera!

    All the best hun
    With much love,
    mj.


  • artis
    April 1

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    Fantastic format, fabulous fable

    fascinatingly featured, flamboyant fairies fancy foraging foxes finding fellowship, fictional fodder for fond friends, fluctuating fluently.


  • PerVirtuous
    March 31
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    Effing freaky. I like it. First I have seen with all one beginning letter. Bunnies for you.


    • Amera gold member
      April 1
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      OMG! Look everyone! The PerV commented on one of my poems! Will wonders ever cease?


  • HaleyMary
    March 31

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    I think this is one of your best, Sis. Not only is it well written by using so many words with the same letter, but also love the triangle/pyramid shape you wrote the poem in, as well. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.

    Haley Mary


  • nordicsky silver member
    March 31

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    Fantastic fabricated fable fascinates frequently flabbergasted friend.

    I guessed the syllables increased by one with each line. I added them up and they came to 55

    You are a genius.

    Love, Peter


    • Amera gold member
      April 1
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      I never thought of adding all the syllables in an Etheree. That's a great way to check yourself. Thanks!


  • DesolatELifE
    March 31

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    Very nice. I like the progression a lot. Very darn good indeed!
    I wrote a poem where the words start with a certain letters today, too.
    Mine was alphabetish. First word starts with A, second with B, etc. I needed to use two words for Y and Z, though, to make the last line whole.
    Called 'Caged Age'.


  • GotLilt
    March 31
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    FFFFantastic

  • jadeangyal
    March 31
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    Fantastic, if finicky. :-)


  • Aelten
    March 31

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    Well, Fabulous.
    I love etherees, and this is just charming. Such a perfectly done form.
    Khia


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    March 31
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    Every single word in this poem starts with the letter F

    ... like I didn't notice, Sis!

    Bunnies for you.


  • JohnnyD gold member
    March 31

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    Also is one of the very few poems out there with four "X"s

    so guess it is rated XXXXX?

    great write cubbie!

    Dad


  • Daizee silver member
    March 31

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    Don't wanna try it when you've been drinking eh? Love your originality.

    Love,
    Stacy

  • Flighty...fanciful...fantastic...

    This was so much fun to read over and over...trying to read it without missing a word or a beat. It took me a few times but I did it!

    The shape adds a sense of measure to the read.

    Very creative!!!


  • Faeryn
    March 31

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    In The Key of F indeed! What a delight to read aloud with all of its toungue twisting-ness. And the shape it is in is a triangle! That's cool! Best of luck in the contest.
    Love,
    Tay


  • StarEyes
    March 31

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    Sis,

    A tongue twisting, mind boggling read for sure!! I love it! You really amaze me sometimes, still today! This is just amazing! I love it!

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta


  • maralisa silver member
    March 31

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    a brillant allliteration poem I like this good luck in the contestmaralisa


  • Cup-a-Joe
    March 31
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    Amera

    Freaking far out!
    Joe


  • cricketjeff gold member
    March 31

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    Well that's certainly some alliteration

    A tour-de-force of tongue tangling

    Great stuff )

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