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Strawberry Blue

Eyes that fell apart
Within themselves
Hazel almonds
Melting into congealed white

And strawberry red hair
That fell onto his shoulders...

Boy
Wearing
Man's
Clothing

And I fell into his
Inviting tendrils
Soft and sturdy
Somehow simultaneously

And freckles
That danced
Across his
Face

They would waltz with death
And his eyes would bear witness
Sturdy arms
Turned into penne
That curled up at his sides

Lids shut heavy
Over creamy orbs
Almond dust

Fruit picked far
Before 'twas ripe

Black I wear
As the basket
Travels by
Carrying soft death

Black we wear as he's planted
But strawberry blue is my soul...

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  • alpPDCjr12
    April 1
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    Nice, I like it! The title is hard to understand until the end, and then it makes sense. Good job!