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Stuffing (Senryu)

He looked around his house
at the forever-smiling faces of his friends
Just the way he stuffed them.

Is it too vague that he's a taxodermist?

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  • halfpast4ever
    April 13

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    Lol so little and short yet so funny, this small poem packs a big punch, its definitely one to brighten someones day. Good job.


    • SouthOfSanity
      April 13
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      haha thanks. well, thats what senryu is. its like haiku, but satirical or ironic. and it doesnt have the syllable limitations.