Her pleas for help muffled
by bandages made to heal
her fake smile slowly fading
to show her pain that’s real
barely holding herself together
with the noose around her neck
her sorrows weep from open wounds
in a black and red mess
the chair pushed from beneath her
by those who pretend to care
so young, with so much to live for
but she has nobody there
Author notes
C.) "When the truth is found to be lies, when all the joy within you dies." Somebody to Love by Jefferson Airplane
sorry was really quick
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I like where you took these lyrics. I could see the scene here. Nice work
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thank you
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brilliant imagery and relative to all
Wow, the emotion in this piece just screamed out to me. an absolutely brilliant and vivid write. i can feel the pain and the picture of the noose around her neck. such imagery! and such talent! you should have won that contest!
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I really like it.
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i absolutely love this
this a brilliant write
the way you put it you could feel it.
and i think alott of people can relate to this as well
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