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Blue Wind.

I just got the air pulled out of me...
Shoved away into the blue swirling wind,
I was singing, literally chirping,
And you pulled that angelic kiss,
And I swear my breath was gone in an instant,
True utter love,
I feel for you.
But if you want to know,
The aftertaste leave me for want of you eternally.

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  • Kiddy
    April 20

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    Nice one...

    Title - 9/10
    Theme - 8/10
    Diction - 9/10
    Uncommonness - 9/10
    Ability to follow rules - 2/10

    Total - 37/50

    -Kiddy