tonight
the rain falls, soft
whispers of tears unshed--
quietly in the darkness here
tonight.
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yet another cinquain.
still having trouble writing but trying, please bear with...
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You set a soft mood.
Indeed, you are back.
Write on....
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Nothing to bear with Mi. It's lovely. It's not the length of the poem, it's what you put into it that counts.
This reminds me of a type of poem Mariza might write. I know she's written some cinquains in the past, but it is more than the form, it's the allusions cast here, mainly of the subtle sorrow within those raindrops and what they portend.
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thank you, Mayne, I'm trying, still finding it hard to write much, but figure I should try, sigh.
Glad you liked it, I so appreciate you and it means much that you did as I respect your opinons and you!
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I know it's hard to write Mi, but you have written what? Three recently. That is more than I have.
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