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The Coming Of Spring






Breathless beats flutter
in butterfly dreams of color,
for senses awaken in dawn’s light,
bestowing adoration to wonder

leggy limbs embraced with eager buds
request warmth of sun’s first kiss
to replenish

whilst pitter patter melodies
whisper between cool winds,
chasing riverside reflections
that trickle into swelling seas

tiny swirls of sand
dance in twists to recover stance,
patiently awaiting imprints
pressed slowly
from lover’s frolic

in twilight’s crisp exposure
star drops sparkle;
capturing the essence  
of sweet wishes
upon wanting wings

as nature recites
another reason of season;

 

heart’s hope blooms...

once again~

 





Author notes

For Sonja! HAPPY 4TH!!!
picture:The Coming of Spring, 1968 http://www.hersailsfilledwithdream.blogspot.com/2008_02_

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  • abu nuwas
    September 7

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    Nice enough...

    ...or maybe I am just in a bad mood. It seemed to me to be at once too simple, and overly obscure. Yet there was something nice about it. Sorry to be so negative. I am sure lots of people will love it.


    • jasminerose
      September 7
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      Thank you Abu Nuwas, any comment is appreciated and truth is always best..I dont' think you are in a bad mood and no worries and no apology needed at all!
      I am just thankful for the time you spent to read and comment on one of my poems!
      Jazzy


  • Nom de Plume
    September 1

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    very beautiful, though hope is a destroyer, not a redeemer your writing is always so soft and just flows so effortlessly.... congrats on your


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    April 11

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    Aw, beautiful, and well worth gold!

    Congrats!
    mj.


    • jasminerose
      April 15
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      Thank you kind Sir for the very lovely compliment on my poem and the congratulations to
      Linda

  • Aw...this is a sweet and pretty poem.
    Well-crafted with imagery.
    Good luck in the contest, friend.



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