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Unknown Entering

You came unanounced
Entered my life with no warning
No sign
Almost like a dream

If you didn't come to me
Would my life still be going on
Would I be trapped in an unwanted life

Without you I feel alone
With you I wish to be alone
Near you I can hardly breath
Your a piece of me
Forever in me

You know me better than I ever thought
If it weren't for you
The scars wouldn't fade
They'd be prominate
Never to heal nor fade

Thank you for entering
Entering with no warning
Maybe
Just maybe
You have saved me

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  • Heroesrox
    March 31
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    I really like these 2 stanzas!


    Without you I feel alone
    With you I wish to be alone
    Near you I can hardly breath
    Your a piece of me
    Forever in me

    You know me better than I ever thought
    If it weren't for you
    The scars wouldn't fade
    They'd be prominate
    Never to heal nor fade


    Keep up the awesome work and thanks so much for sharing!

    • thank you so much! i didnt think many people would like my stuff but that turned out to be wrong!