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Tomatoes

/this is so (rufus)/ shouts the boy
and the girl /laughs/ because she should

the paint drips ↓down↓ [the wall]
her tears are {too much} like everyone else’s
so they turn /a/w/a/y/
(before anyone can see)

& she thinks – to herself – they almost did
they *almost* cared
but %sigh% and oh well
their #stupid# pride
WON’T LET THEM

spirals and status quos
these new fads are only so-so
(she thinks – to herself)

so

H
E
R
E

I go……………………..

between the |lines|
she hides her (: smile
in the ^black&white^
that just seemed so =simple=

oops-a-Daisy
I let go……………..
[of this spiraling LIFE of mine]

CUE crowd to throw tomatoes!!!

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I won bronze on this. And I want to win.

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  • liquidmindforever
    May 30

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    Yes.

    Thank you for entering my contest: PREWRITES FOR BRONZE & SILVER TROPHY WINNERS>

    Wishing you the best
    liquid
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  • Heartbreaker Eyes
    March 30

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    Point or no point, this was beyond insanely epic. I love the status qous part, and the fads...Rufus. XD
    All of it was amazing.
    [Did I tell you I met this hottie with a half pitbull named Rufus? XD]
    Sigh, I love it. One of my faves for sure. Like...totally.
    Good luck in my contest. ♥


    • WithinYourEyes
      March 30
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      I'm glad you liked it. I think Rufus is a silly name. I mean, our Doberman was named Rufus....but when you think about it, it's just such a weird word. Not to mention a strange name.