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dude

dude did you get car insurence
no all it is is reassurance
i thought you might want car insurence
BECAUSE YOUR CAR JUST GOT SMASHED BY A GIAGANTIC SOCCER BALL

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  • misticmoonlite gold member
    March 31

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    well it may need a tweak here and there, your on the right path,car insurance is needed now aday
    for sure, thank you for this entry
    good luck
    mm