If you were to take me on top of the montain
Hand in hand
We would gaze at the
Star strewn sky
And if you were to
Cure me of this plauge
And then we would confirm it to the heavens that we are destened to
Dance to the song of the
Night
Would I put my arm around your neck in a tender embrace
and ceal it with a passionate kiss?
Would I then throw you to the ground?
And break your arm?
Would I then crack your spine?
Stab you in the eye?
And leave you here in this dark abyiss to spend your eternity bleeding?
Would I then leave without saying
"Goodbye"
?
A contest entry
- I've gone insane! Prewrites contest!! by Englandgirl2008.
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For Billie, I love you I am so scared x
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And... awsome background! Rock ON!!!
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You can be scared all you like... but when you join me, I will do ANYTHING and EVERYTHING to ensure your happiness. It's the least you deserve. And I'm afraid... fear is not welcome in my world.
I love you, Emily. And for now... that's all that's important.
xxx
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I love you too, the thing I am scared about is hurting you....*kisses you on the cheek*
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This is really good, its very touching....
good write
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Wow... powerful emotions coming through in that one. I know it's none of my business, but is that really something you think you'd do? Because I don't think you would. Good poem, though.
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Its what I fear I will do I am so afraid that I will hurt Billie
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If your actions are governed by your fear, you will inevitably end up hurting someone. But if you live by what is right, you may be bored, but equally, tomorrow never comes. But I don't think you will hurt Billie. You care too much about him, and you're so worried that you will.
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