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Ode To Sound

Ode to Sound

You fill me up with laughter
shame and heartbreak too
I never ever feel alone
while spending time with you
Open up show me the secret
the seeds of your magic
Where did you come from
you fill up my hollow mind
give me something to think about
soft words
heavy hearts
need you
to move us
Possibly save us

Author notes

All these poems are for my english class

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  • SmartBrick
    March 30

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    I think this poem is very well explained and written. The title goes with the poem and is, well, awesome in itself! Nice one...ToastMohnster....haheha.

    Love,
    The one and only SmartBrick.

    K.flo♥