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Blown away.

Shattered and alone,

broken beyond the bone -

scattered and carried away, (by wind blown).



I belong to nothing - no one -

shelter can no longer be found, what have I done?

I raced fate, and now it seems I've been out-run.

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  • Tzipora
    June 27
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    great ending!
    - i loved this write.
    very good.


  • Symphony
    June 19

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    Racing fate, or indeed, trying to cheat fate, are never good ideas ... and we always lose :[ Seems unfair when you think about this;

    I enjoyed this poem, mainly because it was disjointed, it was like all your thoughts coming together yet still so uncertain and unsure ....

    Thanks for sharing


    • Fixsius
      June 24
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      thank you for your comment
      it was much appreciated.