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A Few Small Repairs

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...And the moon stalled no longer; fell down as he ripped her tangles out.

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  • CinderellaSyndrome
    March 30

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    I'm with Abmsem.
    Well, except for the not usually going for this kind of thing, lol.
    I'm really getting into stuff like this.
    Beautiful. :]]

  • abmsem
    March 30

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    I actually really liked it. I don't usually go for this kind of thing. But it was short, sweet and effective.