Sitting only in the corner.
Pencil in hand writing down thoughts.
Yet, the only thing that comes to mind is,
Where did my life go?
What happened to me?
Am I still who I used to be?
I wonder what I could have been?
Where did I go wrong?
Sitting
Author notes
Titles: option 2
AP Name: Confused_Lovesong
P.S. thanks for holding this great contest.
A contest entry
- Options...Options! by PsychoAnalysis.
950 points, ended April 14, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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this is a really good poem. i liked it. sometimes you just wonder where did everything go? what happened to me? just keep your chin up....you can't have a rainbow without a little rain. keep writing...
~Wicked Lovely
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this is great. i love this poem, and this is exactly how i feel sometimes. its like "what am i doing with my life, i dont recognise this anymore" sort of a thang! anyhoo, this was well penned, and btw, you have an awesome screen name
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Tis interesting. I like it. Good luck!
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Well done poet.. I found you stuck really close to the prompt.... I think you could have added more of why you feel this way, and why. But its a great penning!! Well done and good luck!
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This poem was amazing. It was very short, and the added ending was great...it completed it somehow...great job, best of luck in the contest
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