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I like ponies

I like cars

I like balogna

Cars can take me far.

So once I went driving in a car

I drove twelve miles

And guess what I saw?

I saw a pony

Eating balogna

What an awkward sight...

I named the pony Pokey.

YEAHH BEST POEM EVERR

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  • GreekBetch101
    April 9
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    woow. maddie that is an amazing poem. i am going to give 3 applauds


  • crackerjackie
    March 31
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    Ponies are the best particularly one named CRACKERJACK!!!

  • sketchmuffin39
    March 30

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    that was pure poetry, you know... that just made me cry it was so beautiful. all i can say is... IM GONNA SUE YOU!!!!!
    (: love ya maddds


  • SmartBrick
    March 30

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    I am virtually speechless, but on the outside I am all like whaaaa? Anyway, daydreamer44, that was great. I think I saw that pony, although I named it corny corn cornwallis. Well, I think that that pony is a little screwed up!LOLZ!

    Love, the one and only SMARTBRICK!!!

    K.flo

    • daydreamer44
      March 31
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      hahaha thanks!

      isnt it such an amazing poem??? haha yup, ponies are pretty cooool =)

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