Gently peel the egg shell
from this new born heart.
Be careful not to bruise
as this blossom unfolds.
These petals of delicate purity
posses the innocence of a child.
Make gentle, your first touch
first impression’s last a lifetime.
Imprinting bliss within her soul
with joyous passion from her heart.
Author notes
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Prompt: Virginity
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A contest entry
- Quickie 'till you die by Luciferschild.
500 points, ended March 30, 5 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I love the imagery you put with your poems and how you make them fit with the words. Very Nice!
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ooo this could be taken in many ways.. very metaphorical in deed! I love the fact that I first thought this was about love, then I thought of a new born child, and then I went back to love. Excellent work. Thanks for sharing... Kahy
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Reminds me of my favorite poet W.B. Yeats' poem, "He Wishes For The Cloths Of Heaven
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RV3MR3H9nuc
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very nicely done
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Beautiful.
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