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Better Than Guns

Silence as a tabula rasa
a new blackboard so to speak
where students come to school to think
their cerebrations written down

odd numbers used with evens
new equations finding answers
a welcoming
that stops and listens.

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  • awesome! there isn't a piece of your writing that I haven't loved...do you ever collaborate with others? I would love to try and see what we could come up with...let me know if you are interested...thanks for sharing your awesome talent with all of us...peace and light..kp


  • AshesFromFire
    April 17
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    Nice.
    acceptence is a beautiful and powerful thing.
    Thank you for entering my contest!
    I think its important that we all stop and think about how we treat people and others treat us.
    I like how positively you took the prompt.

  • This reminds me of when I was young and still in school. Brilliant piece x


  • msifreakazoid
    April 12
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    Great write

  • Oh, Nice take on the prompt. I liked where you took this and how well this piece flows. Your imagery is really good and I liked the last stanza alot. Great job on this and good luck in the contest.

    josh

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