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Dilemma "With Eyes Closed"

i'm a fairy
wanting  to take a bite
of what i offer to the world.
the Beatles sung about my creation
in "Strawberry Fields".
alas, i can not partake of their virtue,
for i pine away like Narcissus;
you see, i have an eating disorder --
only stardust and lemon water
... bitter ...
for my singing voice.
damn sweet things!

Author notes

This song has been in my mind for three weeks! Help!!!
Picture Credit: Magical_Dust@deviantart.com

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  • Carolina Moon gold member
    March 31

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    A nice and creative take on the prompt. Well done! Thank you for your entry.