Take me for a while
In your arms with a smile
That's all I hope and pray
Will happen some day
Every piece of my heart
Crumbles and falls apart
Cos I love you
And I need you
Could you heal my brokenness
With just one single kiss?
Could you sink right in
By just touching my skin?
The stillness of the atmosphere
Tells me that you are here
Though physically you are hard to find
You are in my heart and in my mind
Take me for a while
In your arms with a smile
I pray to God above
I'll be united with my love
Author notes
Written @ 00:23 on 11th March 2002
In a list
A contest entry
- "Is to love just a waste?" by angelofcleansheets.
500 points, ended August 8, 2004, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Beautiful
I loved it. Short and sweet. Very emotional and easy to relate to. Great job.
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Aww, that's sweet. I loved the emotion in it. I love that romantic stuff. You did well with the rhyming. Keep that up. And thanks for entering my contest!
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This is gorgeous. I totally loved your wording and hopeful attitude in this poem. I really enjoyed reading this. It's very sweet. Thanks for entering and good luck!
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wow I love this write it is really good I just wish love was really that easy.lol good write and good luck with the contest
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sigh...yes beautiful...
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beautiful :) Loved it. .great write :)
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a good write.
:0)
Nam
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