sacrifices never known
passing glances never shown
seeds of love that have never grown
broken hearts left to die alone
dead curled leaves that winds have blown
dirt erodes, exposing bone
rebel daughter, forever disowned
empty nests, the birds have flown
rose's bed, abandoned, overgrown
empty soul, cold as a stone
and bodies into the abyss are thrown
What did you think
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that depends...what do u think it's about??
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never mind, you already told me, but it's still amazing!!!!!!!!!!!
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wow
this is absolutly amazin!!!!!! the rythming was excellent and i loved how you only used one word to rythme the whole entire thing..... you are absolutly amazing....
i loved the peom of course too... do i know what this is about?????
(i think i do)
400000000000000000 thumbs up!!
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