Tsunami of light
breaks on consciousness’s strands
rebirth from darkness
Author notes
Traditional Haiku
Prompt: A flash-flood of dawn
Picture Credit: http://uribaani.deviantart.com/art/The-Rebirth-65421291
10 – 20 words
A contest entry
- Quick Morning Quickie by Cerulean Sunrise.
400 points, ended March 30, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical Comments Always Welcome
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Simply beautiful. Hope you are having a great summer and all is well with you.
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Hey! I haven't read anything of yours in awhile. I've missed your works. They always make me smile. And this one didn't fail.
Also, I found no grammatical errors. 
This is a very beautiful piece. A picture may be worth a thousand words, but only a few fit it just right, and you have done very well in selecting those. Well done, my friend.
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stunning
love it and the cool pic to go with!
love, light & laughter
Tasha
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i love this. its really good. i love the picture u based it on, it is beautiful
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I love the Haiku, nice pic.. I love the opening ...
kat
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I love the imagery! Especially coupled with the picture. Good luck with the contest.
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Great!
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Awesome.
I don't think I have ever been bold enough to add 's to that word. Neat. -
Great write as always Ken.. Wonderful haiku..though in mine, I didn't mean to do it that way hehe Best of luck!
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(I LOVE this picture!!!) Well thought out... I don't know haikus well, but this speaks to me. Well done. And good luck.
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a wonderful take on the promt and a beautiful image good luck in the contest
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LOVE the pic! And the poem is just as good. Great ku. :
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