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Apathy

Sometimes it seems,
Life is but a dream.
I drift through it without effect.
I see other's dreams that seem so perfect.
Even though I struggle and try,
It seems I can only sit and watch til I die.

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  • Magnetic Storm
    April 4

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    Get up! Move around! Work for something.
    Good write. I've felt this way too. You gotta get up and take action.