a painted smile
on this wretched face
embedded pain
too deep to trace
you walked out on me
taking my heart
crushed the essence
tore it apart
my sadness grows
I silently weep
lost and alone
I can barely speak
the emptiness is here
I can’t handle much
my bitterness deep
my heart too touched
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- Heartbreak by volcaniclastic.
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"my heart too touched" is a great and powerful line.
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smiles and thanks honey♥♥
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My favorite part is...
"my sadness grows
I silently weep
lost and alone
I can barely speak"
Great Write and
Thank You for entering
Good Luck
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Love it.
Thank you for entering
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you are welcome hun .. hugs Angel
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You caught pain and heart break so beautiful. This is a great poem with lovely flow and rhyme and a lot of meaning. Very eloquent
Jake
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thank you my ap hubby.. for the sweet kind words hugs Angel
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