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Tendrils Of Love






Tender whispers
dance blossoms upon winds
as fragrant sweet memories
cascades petals
into spiraled thoughts

essence breathes beats of syllables,
revealing charismatic colors
beyond depth of
soul

as droplets trace blush
in silhouettes of sighs;
fingers lace gently
guiding wings
to embrace

with each flight
singing songs into sunsets

ribbons of love
become

my heartstrings~










Author notes

Picture prompt: ribbons undone by =jyoujo

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  • Skittles-Brownie
    May 1
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    awwwwww pretty

    I like it. This poem shows a lot of feeling. It is nice and open. Really from your heart.


    • jasminerose
      May 1
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      Awww thanks sweet S.B. such a smile always comes to my face from your comments!!!!
      Thank you


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    April 5

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    ... oh that last stanza is priceless. Wonderful. I was wondering about this image but could not find the inspiration - but you certainly did and what a treat to read and enjoy. Congratulations on your beautiful bronze. Very very well done. ~Pamela


    • jasminerose
      April 5

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      Hi Pamela,
      Thank you so very much for the lovely compliment and congratulations too! I am so very delighted you enjoyed this so..
      Thank you
      Linda


  • Errant Panther gold member
    April 4
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    congrats sweet cuz on your well deserved bronze


  • Errant Panther gold member
    April 2

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    juicy last line sweet cuz "ribbons of love become my heartstrings" such romance to draw a lingering sigh. very well constructed piece with subtle and soft allitertions to stir the senses. bravo!


    • jasminerose
      April 4
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      OH thank you my sweet cuz Your thoughts mean a great deal to me and always bring a smile to my face!!!
      ssss


  • justgot2loveme
    March 30

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    way too pretty for words,
    it so soft and tender, very sweet.
    this piece has your lovely soul in
    every word.

    justgot2loveme


    • jasminerose
      March 30
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      Awww thank you my friend! Your comment has brought a smile to my heart! Thank you!


  • poet2angels gold member
    March 30

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    Sigh~
    This is beautiful!
    Such a lovely flowing piece with pretty words of passion and beauty!
    Perfect for the soft pic you chose...
    I love every line of this ...and you penned the perfect ending as always...

    Lynda


    • jasminerose
      March 30
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      Thank you for the very lovely compliment on my poem!! I am so delighted you loved this one Thank you for hosting another fabulous contest for our group! They are always so inspirational Lynda!!
      Jazzy


  • Carolina Moon gold member
    March 29

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    Absolutely stunning my friend. Such a beautiful and delicate write. I wish you all the best.

    Linda


    • jasminerose
      March 29
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      AWWW thank you Birthday girl to be for such a sweet compliment! Always such a pleasure to hear your thoughts on my poetry!!
      Linda

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