My soul has been captured
in a single moment of bliss, as lips
of tenderness capture serenity
& loves song plays accapella,
against freefalling hearts.
This is a love ever after of soul,
my spirit is complete with yours.
Author notes
Hmmm.
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Comments
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I love this poem. "My soul has been captured
in a single moment of bliss" It's beautiful! Xds-gX
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What do you mean, hmmm? lol
Hmmm, I've jusy written a nice, gentle, sweet piece about new, dawning love?
Or some other kind of 'hmmm'?
Good write.
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This poem holds such a beauty and the greatness of love. I really do admire how you've used your words to express your soul.
Well done.
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& loves song plays accapella,
against freefalling hearts.
--Aww this is so sweet. Made me smile=] -
Great poem, really beautiful, almost sing-song in a way. Like a song could play along with it. Great job and good luck, like were you took the prompt
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