In this world of peace and happiness,
Lies undulating fear,
More created a paradise,
But this seems to me More's nightmare.
A place of fear,
A place of horror,
Where to not fit in,
Is to die.
Author notes
Prompt: Write a poem of ten lines or less centering around a 7 letter word that begins with "U"
A contest entry
- Pick a word - Write a poem in 10 LINES or Less (U) by The Fun House.
1050 points, ended April 17, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I appreciate all criticisms. Please keep them constructive though.
Comments
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first line you need another "s" in happiness
Other than that this is a lovely piece of poetry and I like it muchly.
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Oops! Thanks I forgot :S I'll fix that!
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aw a deep write good luck in the contest
maralisa
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