he said im leaving
I can not stand to hurt you
but I must keep you safe
it would be as if I never existed
as if you never existed ?
no you can't leave me!
I love you can't you see
we were destined to be!!!
he said I must leave
I threw my arms around his neck
he quickly removed them and said
promise me one thing
you must keep yourself safe
because I will not be here to rescue you
you will always have my heart
move on with your life and forget me.
What did you think
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Awe..I saw this movie and i think you did a good job here..
Heartbreaking though..As i read your words i could see their faces and it was so sad..you portrayed it so well.
Great write here.
-Mandi
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Awe...This really reached out to me, and touched my heart. Great job on this. You are very talented. Evemauy
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awww thats cute i reather a boy leave then to hurt me it takes a real man to do that but i love you poem
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i heart twilight!
i wrote a poem about this too, a while back though it wasn't on this site I have it written in one of my journals I'll have to post it so you can read it. This is really good, a very well rounded account of what happenend the heart break that they both shared.. sad, but the whole series was amazing...
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This so reminds me of my last breakup. bloody one at that. he was like i want you to be safe, but you are too much for me. so f him. lol. great write.
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i LOVED this.
I've read twilight. And i hated that part of the book. It's as though all of a sudden, you realise- Nobody's perfect, nobodys love can be unstoppable. I think this poem worked well
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