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her tumb stone

in her loveing memory
i saw what had her eternal inprint
it brangs me to my knees
i love her
its her birthday
i broght roses for her
but she makes the roses seem like weeds
compaired in butiey
her love is in the ground
may mother earth take her away
i wish for safe passige into heaven for her
and may she be in eternal bliss
in loveing momory of.......
Amanda Dronski 2/15/93-2/13/08

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  • aawww this is lovely...a few spelling mistakes but they are easily correctred.
    Well penned
    Emily

  • babiigurl95
    April 3
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    aww i'm Srry

    i'm srry...who was it

    • my girlfriend

      she was my girlfriend she died 2 days bfor her birthday and one day bfor vallintines day i had gotten a 280 doller ring for her she was buggin me about for 2 months i got it for her 2 hrs after i got it for her i herd she had just died in a car wreck i still think about her even thos it's been a year she still remains in my mind u can understand that can't you

      • babiigurl95
        April 6
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        must have been sad

        i'm really srry about that especially if u were planning on proposing after u had got her the engagement ring

        • it was

          i was planning on doing that i still have the ring and i will allway's ceep it. i posted a new poem for her it's better then this one check it out

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