Nothing can stop
This moment here
This feeling inside
The freedom to be me
There is no other in my life
That can enter my heart
I have closed it now
For myself and me
It is time for me to love
Time for me to show
Just how important
I am to me
Things will change
As they are wont to do
But in this moment
I am with me
Author notes
This is just something I've come into very recently
A contest entry
- Anything!!! Pre-writes! Whatever! by MysteriousWhisper.
500 points, ended April 14, 87 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is wonderful, a document of beauty; a person discovering self-worth and the desire to finally be able to love themselves for themselves.... I wish more were able to see this to give it a try.
This was very liberating!
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My Sweet BeautifulSecret, ILU, this is an important piece. It shows your growth as a person and a Woman. Freedom to be with ones self without the inhibiting factors of being with another is freedom itself. Learning to love yourself frees your heart, and heals your heart. I love you darln'.
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it is good to be an individual and to decide to find out who you are. or at least try. this was a beautiful poem. good job and good luck in the contest!
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Thanks for your comment. I am actually not taking time to discover myself really...This poem is a result of discovering myself. It's about realizing that I don't have to be with anyone to feel complete : ) It's amazing and I have a feeling of such freedom. I feel good!!
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This is true!
We are the ones that decide what we let in, though you will find somethings come with a key. They are not locked out. Time for one's self is very important and if you can get some.....enjoy it! There are times in life that life takes a front row to love, but if it is "the right love", the partnership will make it bearable! (check the third to last line....you ment something else...I think?) Very nice, The Shaker
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I might have spelled that wont word wrong... but I think the pronunciation is correct just can't remember the word... Anyways thanks for your comment. This piece is really about my realization that I don't want to get married. I spent my whole life thinking that's what I wanted, and spent my whole life looking for that man. But I don't need him to complete me. I am what will complete myself...I just wish I had known this years ago instead of wasting my time with certain "disagreeable" men haha! There is a freedom in being with myself and a great feeling knowing that what ever happens will happen. I'm not saying no to marraige but I am saying no to waiting and to looking. I am me and I am going to love every minute I get to be with myself, no hinderance..no bullshit...no hurt...just me...and my thoughts and my friends and my family...It's the best feeling ever!!
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