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My Rock

I just want my rock
That rock that keeps me steady
Calm and ready
Ready for the day
With you … I can take anything
You are my life
My strength
My shining star
God I miss you
Success seems so far
I try to be strong
But the days get so long
My inner peace seems so far gone
It’s so hard to fight this world without you near
Stuck in this place with that oh so familiar face
My anger is consuming me.
Turning me into the beast that I don’t want to be
I need my rock
My steady stone
That one man that helps me to not feel so alone

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  • Hate-And-Pain
    March 29

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    Very nice, steady flow and every word fits perfectly. The only thing I can think of is to break it into stanzas, but its not necesary everything else is perfect. A great write indeed