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I used to love this person.

I am sorry that I looked at you with meaning
and that i cried in front of you for comfort
or that i ever spilled out the words of, "i love you."
something you fear I'm sure.
commitment itself, right?

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  • Joy.To.The.World
    March 29

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    Hey girly,
    I like this its simple but i think you should change

    "the words of"

    to just

    "the words"

    im sorry if your really upset i hope you feel better. Write soon if you get chance.
    Love,
    Joy