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Acrostic Ukulele

Uncanny the way your fingers fly,
Keening music fills the sky,
Underneath the staring moon,
Listen world to its croon,
Echo the songs of your native land,
Lend to the story a helping hand.
Elucidate the memories!

Author notes

Written for a contest. Prompt "write a poem less than ten lines about a 7-letter word beginning with "U""

A contest entry

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  • catstar
    October 16

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    I can not criticise anything that I know I would do a lot worse. Acrostics fascinate me and you have done this really well. I can not write acrostics to save my life so to me this is amazing. Thank you for entering.


  • MoonStarRaven silver member
    June 2

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    This is a fun little poem I love acrostics and yours is very well written and very imaginative! Thanks for an entertaining read and good luck in the contest you entered!


  • PurpleSky
    June 2

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    very nice acrostic and you even made it rhyme so all the better. Interesting subject to write about. good job and Thank you so much for taking the time to enter and good luck to you in my contest.
    huggles
    Lena


  • The Fun House silver member
    April 17

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    Beautifully done and there is a great flow to this piece that brings such serenity as I read it. Great take on the prompt.


  • HereComesTheSun
    April 16

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    amazing job with this piece, i loved it loved it you did a stellar job and a ukulele was a awesome work and you portrayed it so well. great job with this and thanks for entering


  • maralisa silver member
    March 29
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    a wonderful acrustic good luck in the contestmaralisa

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