Teasing and pleasing,
a lot of laughter.
Lips whispering no,
body screaming don’t stop,
wanting more of this purple desire.
Lightly dancing across my breasts,
breath held,
awaiting the music of the great Maestro.
Stroking down my thighs,
sending quivering delight,
mind ready to explode.
Gentle whispers against my spread wings,
caressing my flower’s bud,
stirring an ocean from within.
Longing from deep depths,
as sweet torture sets body on fire.
Such a simple tool you use on me,
one that takes a body into flight.
Purple feather,
purple passion,
bringing me to a red hot fire.
Please tell me what you think
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Soft and sensual which fits the prompt so well. Lovely imagery used with imagination.
Well done
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Jem
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Simple delicious fun! I feel that you have slightly overused the commas but other than that you have done a wonderful job here.
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great entry
in any contest
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lol! Isn't it amazing how one can get so much pleasure from something as simple as a feather?! Personally, I feel that it's the One who is actually using the items to give pleasure that gives it!
I thought you did a splendid job here ... it was simple, yet spoke volumes and it gave me the feeling of safety, so WELL DONE! -
I think you did this extremely well. This is very sensual from what I am used to reading from you, but like I said this is well done.
I think this part here is what truely wove all this together;
Gentle whispers against my spread wings,
caressing my flower’s bud,
stirring an ocean from within.
Well done overall shimmer.
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*sweats*
damnit girl.
wonderfully penned.
Love ya
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lol didn't even have time to do the background. thanks hun and will answer your message in a few seconds
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