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Um dude.

Um..Dude?
Where's my disco ball?
I want it back.
I want it now.
Can't survive without...
Disco!
You lost it!
No....
No......
NO!!!!!!!!!!!!
HOW CAN I SURVIVE.

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  • racergirl212006
    November 5
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    very unique, made me smile thanks for entering


  • ladybug.
    November 4
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    I removed this for a reason.
    You didn't have it approved by me, plus it's not even a song.

    It wasn't necessary to enter it again.

  • Juno101
    November 3

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    I find it amusing and it reminds me of "I Will survive"(the song)
    Makes me think of you needing the disco ball to party but since its gone you can't party. Or you just miss that type of music. This didn't make laugh but your comment below "Im freakin desperate" made me smile.


  • funnybone
    October 17

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    hmmmmm the loss of a disco ball is not something that makes me lol.. made me smile dear poet but not lol!! sorry
    great write though and good luck in my contest


  • Crazy9Piano8Freak
    September 21

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    I don't really get it.... Not something that's making me laugh hysterically... got anything else? Something I might understand better? Try again please.


  • LullabyOfADeadMan
    September 2
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    lol. funny. not the disco ball!!

    ~~Tay.


  • Sheilasbabygal4life gold member
    September 1
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    Alright how was that funny? That was good though, But not funny! Thanks for entering and best of luck!


  • Griswold silver member
    August 28

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    Hmmmm, I like Disco music, always gets the ladies up and dancing which is what a DJ is supposed to do. But so does "Get Low/Apple Bottom Jeans" Funny write, but I would remove it from all the contests it didnt win in, makes you look desperate for more trophys.


  • rinzurajan
    August 28

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    wow...was funny and yet too abstract...

    favourite lines...

    Disco!
    You lost it!
    No....
    No......
    NO!!!!!!!!!!!!
    HOW CAN I SURVIVE.

    leaving the reader in giggles...

    good luck


  • lolagirl
    August 27
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    does this have anything to do with my contest?! its about animals


  • skilter
    August 25

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    You entered this into all those contests???? GENIUS! Thats the funny part about this in my opinion......... awesome and good luck in all those contests!


  • FloridaGatorQueen silver member
    August 15
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    LOL Disco is dead man. Been dead for over 30 years. LOL This had me laughing. I enjoyed the read!!! Thank you for entering my contest

  • poets whisper silver member
    August 11
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    well I did say anything. Can't you come up with something new? You always put this in my contests and I think it's hopeless ...

    • Blue-Rose Beauty
      August 11
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      I have 72 poems. This is just my favorite.

      • poets whisper silver member
        August 11
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        I have over 3000 ... let's play catch-up.


        • Blue-Rose Beauty
          August 11
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          It says 14 on yours, and I was kidding. This is my worse, I just find it amusing.

          • poets whisper silver member
            August 11
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            I have to delete every so often so that I can find stuff to enter pre-writes. I used to be piccola too. But I'm trying to let that account die so I deleted everything. I think it takes 3 months for kevin to do something when you want to leave the site. But it's true, I really do have over 3000 poems. A lot of it is trash and should be deleted anyway but I save everything I write to disc.


            • Blue-Rose Beauty
              August 11
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              Right, I knew you were Piccola. I kinda entered this in your contest because I knew.

              Yes, I believe you. I just started three months ago and I'm trying.

              • poets whisper silver member
                August 11
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                don't try too hard. Having a lot of poems in the system is a pain. The server only holds about 200 at a time or something. When I want to enter a pre-write, it only takes me to G or H or something so I have to delete a bunch to get to what I want. So I just keep things on a disc ... it's really a pain to have a lot of poetry posted.

  • XxLuckyxX
    August 3

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    This poem definitely made me laugh. It is definitely a quirky poem but it made me laugh and that is what I asked for. A piece that made me laugh or smile, regardless of the content. I think it was very original and to be honest, so stupid it made me laugh. Thanks for the entry. Best of luck in the contest.


  • lesbian-in-love
    August 2
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    wow ok so i did laugh but can i say this is someone obessed with disco!

  • piccola silver member
    July 26
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    contest stalking moron.


  • ourgirlFriday
    July 26
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    Quirky little poem...need a sugar high moment for sure, here, though...


  • LonelyAngel
    July 25

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    Why did you even think of writing such a pointless piece? It was so pointless however, that I thouroughly enjoyed it. It is so funny and random...disco ball?

    You do seem to enter them in random contests though!

    Well done, best of luck.

    xYx

  • piccola silver member
    July 14
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    this has nothing †o do with my contest ... you seem to just click and enter it in random contests and don't take any of them seriously, It has been entered in more than one of mine. I am DQing it for that reason. I may put you on ignore so that you can no longer see my contests. I don't think it's all that funny. If you want a freakin disco ball, go on dancing with the stars and earn one like everyone else


  • Leance
    July 12

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    Oh, now this is a good one. It brings forth images of my brother's bird who actually is on top of a ball that is connected to a wind chime. He gets the ball going and continues to run on it. We coined it the disco ball. He waits until the afternoon when the sun is out and it flashes on the wall. Crazy freaking bird. Anyway, thanks for the bit of humor and reflection. Well done.
    Thanks for entering and best of luck in the contest.
    Leance L


  • The cliche typo
    July 9
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    what the hell? hahah i lovve it!

    finalist list!

  • XxLoverOfDarknessxX
    July 8
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    I loved this! I couldn't stop laughing as I read this. WOW! it was hilarious! keep up the good work! thanks for entering and good luck in my contest!


  • happy kitty kat
    July 1
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    this is so incredibly stupid.

    i LOVE it! i love stupid things you hit the nail. good luck in my contest.

  • piccola silver member
    June 29
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    go on dancing with the stars ... if you win, the prize is almost like a disco ball. I don't think you read the directions for the contest ... looks like you just entered on a whim. Something that was given no thought and has been entered willy nilly in other contests. your write is being removed. I intended on having a serious contest ... this makes it a mockery.

  • Mercury Rising
    June 24
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    Funny and cute and a pleasure to read. Best of luck in my contest, and thanks for entering.

  • arnal
    June 17
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    Interesting, thanks for sharing your thoughts.


  • jezza15
    June 15
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  • Oh.My.Juliet
    June 14

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    The beginning is good but after that it falls apart. A 5 year old could have written this. Not trying to be mean, keep trying. <3


  • Jesann gold member
    June 14

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    Mmmm maybe I'm not young enough to get this....sorry.
    But, obviously there are others who do....as they are splitting their sides with laughter.

    Thank you for taking the time to enter.
    Wishing you all the best.


  • LittleAnn
    June 13
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    Okay, plainly speaking: I don't get this.
    I don't know what thoughts you had when you wrote this, I don't even know who you are. But just looking at this poem, I don't see the relation to my contest. Sorry.

    I hope you're not mad at me for saying this...

    Keep on writing!
    Annie


  • Hihamburger
    June 13
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    WELCOME TO THE FINALS!!!
    GREAT JOB!


  • dieu.
    June 13
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    This is... um. Pointless, should I say?
    Not trying to be harsh, I just can't ifnd another word.


  • kira1115
    June 13

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    Died laughing while I read! Great job and good luck in the contest!
    Kudos on being the first and the fastest to post your poem!!
    Kira1115

  • Hihamburger
    June 13
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    FUNNY!!!

    All right you got the first spot! YAY! I love the randomness!!! Good luck! XD


  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    June 6

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    Ummmm well yes ok then hehe, you have a great sense of humour. I can see that lol. Best to you in the contest


  • Visit.Me.On.Mars
    May 25

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    lol!!! This was funny! I loved it! soooo creative as well... haha im still laughing! I love the humor in this great job! =]


  • paulcreates silver member
    April 30
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    Well, I don't know what I'd do without MY disco ball


    Paul


  • Minstrel-Morose
    April 28
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    .....no comment?

  • XxLoverOfDarknessxX
    April 18

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    lol i think that this is hilarious. i started laughing after the second line. i loved this; it made me smile. this was an amazing entry! thanks for entering and good luck!

  • mew2
    April 12
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    this is quite good thanks for the entry


  • Origami Shapes
    April 5

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    I think of Abba and flaired trousers - John Travolta and Olivia Newton John, disco fever on the balls of our feet.


  • Redneck626
    April 2
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    That's pretty hilarious!


  • poet360
    March 31
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    LOL very funny!
    =)


  • Stripes
    March 31
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    ahahahha.... i liked this.. very creative and twisted.. good luck!


  • CookieZeal Greeters member
    March 31

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    I think I must've dropped the ball, because I'm not understanding it very well..lol. Apparently others got it.

    Thank you for posting, however.


  • John Timothy Bailer
    March 30
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    lol shh... i have a discoball in my room lmao


  • chills gold member
    March 30

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    I think my name invites some misplaced stuff...... nice to live vicariously on the edge of all that stuff.... Have three for just being alive!!

  • Blue-Rose Beauty
    March 29
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    Wow.


  • stepbystep
    March 29
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    writers block? (:
    and you come up with this ingenious idea?
    (: man, im so jealous

  • Blue-Rose Beauty
    March 29
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    Thanks for all the nice comments.


  • hisaddiction
    March 29
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    lol...nice one honey.


  • juggalette cutie
    March 29
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    forgot these

  • juggalette cutie
    March 29
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    but itz all good i get writers block too

  • Blue-Rose Beauty
    March 29
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    Yeah.. Um..
    What can I say.
    Writers block?

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