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A Dream Of Midsummer

In the forest
in the glen
moonlight filters
through the trees

The stars sparkle
and the brooks mumble
the grass whispers
in the wind.

A magical night
a midsummer's eve
the earth stirs
and the sky sings

But all these things
are lost to my senses
while your arms
hold me close.

The heavens call for love
the moon begs it be so
there is a sweet heaviness in the air
that true love cannot ignore

The flowers heady perfume
embraces this bower of night
and are gazes are locked
as you hold me tight.

With a sparkle in your eyes
and a smile on your lips
you caress my face
making it impossible to resist

With your hands you touch my body
with your love you touch my soul
Setting passion flowing forth
like and all consuming blaze.

The earth stirs within itself
as in times of old
when man still knew true love was real
and creation had not waxed cold

Your body is mine
as you make your love known
and in that infinite moment
I hear that primeval song.

I become earth
and you, the sky
I am life bursting forth
and you, burning fire...

Like rolling, tumultuous waters
and roaring, powerful wind
our storm of pleasure swells
and fills us both within.

Hearts beat strong together
Bodies are completely one
Minds and souls are lost
as we cave in to our love...

The world vibrates and shakes
with the loudness of silence
and time stops between breaths
as true love burns it's brilliance.

My eyes opens to yours
your hand grasps mine
and our bodies answer each other
as we give back into time...

My love you are my world
and your smile tells me you know
as we cling to one another
the burning fires only grow.

In the trees
amidst the woods
dawn breaks softly
through the stars...

And the sky sings
with the morning light
for true love
has been realized this night.

Author notes

I am pretty proud of this one. It has a nice flow and great imagery in my opinion. It is really how I feel too when he and I are together. Perhaps the title is a bit cliche, but it fits nonetheless. I LOVE YOU JAMIE!

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  • ckwriter69
    April 19

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    This does have nice imagery and expresses your love for Jamie. Thanks for sharing and keep writing.