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Cigarettes and Blue Seduction

You are a seduction
to the senses
the essence of male
everything is rapture in your arms...

Your blue gaze holds me
my thoughts catch in my throat
the deepest of true loves
has captured my heart.

Your strength carries me
those arms that embrace my body
the Bear-heart within you
protects and guards this love...

Your tenderness astounds me
sweet smiles, and soft whispers
the pleasure gains momentum
and you haven't even begun.

The taste of your lips
the smell of cigarettes
the feel of your skin
fuels the strength of my love...

Blue seduction and fire
incense to my passion
burning adoration like a brand
my soul is eternally bound.

Entrapment never felt so good
no boundaries now exist
your heart carries mine
in this endless song we share...

There is nothing
in earth or blazing sky
that fulfills me so completely
as everything that you are.

Author notes

Well, this one was definitely off the top of my head. I remember when Jamie and I first started dating, he would always wear this cologne called "Blue Seduction" and that smell mixed with the smell of his cigarettes was always an erotic sent to me. He was wearing that cologne again the other day and so I had to come up with something.

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  • ckwriter69
    April 2

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    I like this write that shows a strong bond between you and your lover. And thanks for the author notes to explain the connection. Thanks for sharing and keep writing.

  • Beautifully written I really like it you have captured the passion very well in this poem.