honking, flapping vee
mirrored in my bowl
alphabet soup?
In a list
A contest entry
- HAIKU ~~~ MIRRORS AND REFLECTIONS by maa.
999 points, ended April 6, 35 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Can you relate to this?
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I'm with the others as in I can't quite follow this poem, but I still like its content all the same. Some poetry should only make perfect sense to the poet himself anyway! I know I have poems like that. Always like haiku writing...difficult writing for me to do, so I appreciate those who can really make them work!
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how smart and original !
only a childlike heart with abundant imagination can come up with such a surprising aha-moment ... explaining this haiku would be like a magician revealing the secrets of his tricks ...
hope these feathered "vees" don"t drop any yucky "os" into your bowl ...
wonderful ...
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can't make head or tail of this poem, my friend. not your fault though. i spent 15 minutes on the riddle. i like your smile and beard.
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Really great take, here. I like your piece. Keep up the great work and thanks so much for sharing!
Best wishes in the contest, to you.
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Different and funny!
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Eating outside
eh? This is a bit different for you. Not the trad 5/7/5 & punctuation! A departure & an interesting ku! All the best in the Contest.
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Very swift AHA moment, and a delightful picture of the reflection in your bowl of sustenance. A delightful haiku.
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I'm sorry. I don't understand the poem. Could you please explain it to me?
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Close to home as we hear them flying overhead these days...Delightful read!
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Nice! Vivid image! Hope nothing else except the reflection went in the soup!
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Wonderfully penned!!
Good luck in the contest!!
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