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Not all in one time

I love in you even this
That you show me your self
Piece by piece

You never hurry up with all
Except these moments
When we are together
As one

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  • happy birthday anna

  • AAh..the love is witnessed and the joy is shared..the soul is exposed and beauty is expressed..well done..thanks for sharing..

  • individuality gold member
    March 29
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    like a patchwork quilt, each moment is a piece being built upon, time and smiles colouring the senses. a good poem.