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My treasure

My treasure
You
This one
Whom I’m afraid to lose
Each day
I know I shouldn’t
Come what may
I’ll just keep my place
In your heart
I know that

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    April 4

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    And I also know that the love poetry is very real one and the beauty of the love is wonderfully spoken through the efective words..


  • individuality gold member
    March 29

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    a short but to the point piece of poetry showing that you are in someone's heart, i think we all tend to fear losing love, a good poem.