I really don't know how to bake
an issue I just have to shake.
I've tried before but made mistakes
my guests walked out with belly aches!
I'd love to wine and dine with steak
but first this curse I'll try to break.
I pray one day, for heaven's sake
a cafe buffet to serve with cake!
Each night I lay most wide awake
dismayed that I feel such a fake,
but hey, I'll give myself a shake
and have a picnic by the lake!
My friends with wine we'll first partake
its fine bouquet they'll gladly take.
With my soiree success I'll make,
and they'll not know they're eating snake!
Or maybe just make fries and steak
now that 'should' be a piece of cake,
if only I could stay awake
fries and steak, a piece of cake!
Author notes
http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/wip/monorhyme.html
Monorhyme
A Monorhyme is a poem in which all the lines have the same end rhyme.
In a list
A contest entry
- A bit different. IF you love to RHYMe enter here by GotLilt.
900 points, ended April 4, 17 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Very funny =]
Steak and cake, though.. even if I liked steak (and wasn't vegetarian), the prospect of eating it with cake is putrid!
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Great rhyme and flow. I've had a couple of attempts at this one...no luck as yet
Best of luck to you
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LOLOLOLOLOLOL This was wonderful, I loved the rhyem and ryme. I can't beleave that last line it so funny. It was a pleasure to read.
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lol This is great!! I love the form..You seem to have mastered it! Great work my friend..best of luck.
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*speechless*
I tried this but after a couple of lines lost it completely.
Wonderful use of monorhyme technique.
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ewwww LOL Thanks for this entry!
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snake, cake, steak, it matters not to me it is food lol if there is no room on my plate then just throw it on the floor near my feet and i will get to it - a good fun poem
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Horrendous
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Wonderful
Great use of monorhyme. So very creative. Best of luck in the contest
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