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No more tears.

Wipe those tears fair maiden,
for they need not fall on cheek,
your knight will soon approach you,
to halt your time so bleak.

For a maiden such as thee,
shall never wander far alone.
you'll find your times of happiness,
among the walls of Sfallgimon.

My lady will make sure of this,
for her heart so pure you'll see,
will track a suitor for your bliss,
with your place upon his knee.

For no maidens fair disheartened,
will be allowed to suffer so,
for should your joy be broken,
cold steel will end the blow.

And banishment from castle walls
will be the sources fate,
for hanging high dishonoured names,
will show upon the gate.

So smile fair maiden faefevertears,
this will be your sorrows end,
for my lady and this knight,
will soon find your special mend.

We shall hold a banquet in your name,
set claim a hand to warm your heart,
for your favour held among us,
we shall never wish depart.

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  • Greenwolfe 1962
    April 9

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    Brilliant

    Tis oh so fine that lines may sing
    Of sirs and ladys of thy King
    To wish and dream of all fine things
    That once were played on minstrel strings

    That I might go in search of thee
    To lead me here to my lady
    The one once known FaeFeverTears
    My search is done it now appears .


    Sir I would not change a word . The title ,
    the first line , nor the last , or any in between .
    A pure joy Sir Knight . This is why you are a favorite . And why you shall remain so . I
    love rhyme and you do it so well .

    Greenwolfe 1962


  • Mistress Leala silver member
    March 29

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    Awe, I am so deeply honoured. This is so exquisite. I am ... wow, thank you both so very much. I know my knight it out there and one day will gallup up with his steed and take my breath away. [hugs to you both] My deepest gratitude!


  • Lady of the Lake
    March 29

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    Such beautiful words of honor, with kindness flowing from your pen, you my Knight are simply wonderful, as all who reads will see...
    For it is true that safety, love and kindness is all that dwells within the walls of our castle and only those whos hearts are true will ever be welcomed in...

    all my love for thee only


    • Sir Pelleas
      March 29

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      My Lady..

      Your heart so pure and warming to this knight, has gave honour strong with words of endearment.
      I shall make see that your dreams are held tight within these walls for all to share in happyness and merryment always.


      Sir Pelleas