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Silent Lines

Blank pages
In scattered places
In random notebooks…
Empty lines,
Taking up spaces.

With their silence.

So quiet they scream,
I open my mouth.
A reflex, feeling the desire to vomit words
And nothing comes out.

A whisper,
A glottal stop,
A speck on a page.
Trapped inside a mind without marked exit signs
And so they tumble around
Until the pressure builds and BAM!
They land fecklessly on to a page.

With no regard for my sanity.
Or order.
Or diction.
Or depth.
Just my thoughts.
And pieces of myself, trying to fill the empty space.

Author notes

just kinda how i wind up with new pieces...

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  • geminiblacc silver member
    September 12

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    I LOVE THIS! I love the intensity of it. It reminds me of my gawd awful writer blocks that I get every now and then. You are very talented.

  • hey

    So quiet they scream,
    I open my mouth.
    A reflex, feeling the desire to vomit words
    And nothing comes out.

    A whisper,
    A glottal stop,
    A speck on a page.
    Trapped inside a mind without marked exit signs
    And so they tumble around
    Until the pressure builds and BAM!
    They land fecklessly on to a page.

    With no regard for my sanity.
    Or order.
    Or diction.
    Or depth.
    Just my thoughts.
    And pieces of myself, trying to fill the empty space.
    U did a great job with this poem.. Alsome work n great emotions