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Insanity

Its the insanity
and the abnormality
in the amount
of conformity
which brings about
the destruction
and deformation

of humanity.

 

Stripping away individualism

and all signs of realism.

Lifes trapped in a cycle

of consumerism

and close minded idealism.

Most people worship one thing

its not god,its green,

made of paper,

and printed by fakers.

They control the mass

with their fake ass

CASH.

Money rules all

makes empires rise

and then fall.

Creats kings and sires

its the only thing all people desire.

 

We need to stop the greed

and the indifference to those in need.

Get outside the box

and live life like your free

instead of puppets hanging on strings.

 

Be yourself

and not a product on the shelf.

 

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  • queenie
    April 13

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    this is raw and powerful. recited in a spoken word forum, it would pack a mighty punch. you evoked your passion and the internal rhymes had the strength to take it to the next level. my best to you in the contest.

  • Superb Plus +

    A very fine write, indeed, with which I tend to agree. It reminds me of two which I wrote, one called: Puppets, and the other titled: Ele-Mental:

    Puppets: http://allpoetry.com/poem/2276250

    Ele-Mental: http://allpoetry.com/poem/2986932


  • Umi Juvariel
    April 9

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    Great alliteration here. This piece was well written, and I enjoyed it. Excellent write and good luck in my contest.

  • this was brilliant, thank you for entering my contest and keep up the amazing work


  • PoJonez
    March 30
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    Ditto what she said, especially about their stashes of cashes....


  • UnknownFemale
    March 30

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    Really great piece. Let's all stop being puppets! Let's take their stashes of cashes and stick them up their asses. I truly loved this poem.
    Thanks for the entry and good luck!

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